My First Review on Triggerstreet

I got my first review on TriggerStreet for In the Arms of the Enemy, from a Mr. Happy.

He/she says Trixy.Is.Nuts. (in those words and punctuation), which is funny because that's what I intended.

He thinks the 2nd act is rubbish, and apparently the third act is 1 hour of action written into 35 pages! (in Hollywood, a page is a minute). Which. Was. A. Mistake. considering I sent it to a Hollywood agent.

I don't know what to take away, other than that a total rewrite is necessary, and that it's impossible to please everyone.

I think the best option is to work on my brand new screenplay, Catching Megan, which is based around a nasty Internet-dating-gone-wrong moment.